You are requested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to enquire about the course Explain which course you are interested inTell what you know about the universityExplain why you should receive the

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You are requested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to enquire about the course

Explain which course you are interested in
Tell what you know about the university
Explain why you should receive the scholarship

Dear sir

I am writing this letter to enquire about the availability scholarship courses under your prestigious university "Oxford". My name is Rajat and I am doing B. Com.

As, we all know that popularity of accountancy is gaining ground among the society. It explore the optimum opportunity as well as surrounds people with surplus outlay. Perhaps it would be a good idea for me to accumulate the skills of this particular course.

I know that your university has a special value among youngsters as it filled adults with numerous scholarship courses and allows them to choice course according to their desire. Apart from it, your management enrich juveniles with exceptional features such as excellent resources, proficient staff, comfortable sitting, convininent time and so on. I have read enormous articles of your services and reputation. Your this act is really praiseworthy which help children to achieve towering success.

I belong to a middle class family and my father burns mid night oil for earning bread and butter for my family. I am an excellent student and always toil hard for gaining remarkable results. My father never nourish me with this course because of its massive fee. Therefore, need of scholarship is desperately required. It would be a huge privilege for me to attend the course in your prominent university.

Now, I look forward to hearing your positive response.

Yours faithfully

Rajat

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...ame is Rajat and I am doing B. Com. As, we all know that popularity of accoun...
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...arkable results. My father never nourish me with this course because of its mass...
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... positive response. Yours faithfully Rajat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, therefore, well, apart from, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28138528139 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00581945888 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8915328911 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124192498678 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355421408682 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445060603433 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636825513314 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047088186048 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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