You would like to participate in the seminar in another country. Write a letter to person in charge of seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to enquire about the seminar will be held in your prominent country Canada. As it is related with my work, I desperately want to attend it. I am urvashi from India and working as a PRT teacher under central government.
I know this will be held on next month. I would be grateful if you could describe me comprehensive detail about this seminar for example, proposed date as well as period . Thus, I will make reservations according to that. Apart from it, schedule of the program as topics of lecture, presentations, PPT's and etc. Presence of time table allows me to prepare accordingly.
Moreover, you are requested to enrich me with the accommodation plan whether your organization would surround me with hall of residence or I will manage myself. It will be a huge privilege for me to accumulate a great deal of knowledge under the guidance of experts. Therefore, I donot want to miss this optimum opportunity. Eventually, you send me detail information including complete cost.
Now, I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Urvashi
Comments
Essay evaluation report
I am writing this letter to enquire about the seminar will be held in your prominent country Canada
I am writing this letter to inquire about the seminar which will be held in your prominent country Canada
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 185 250
No. of Characters: 874 1200
No. of Different Words: 122 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.688 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.846 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir I am writing this letter to enquire abou...
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... Canada. As it is related with my work, I desperately want to attend it. I am u...
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... is related with my work, I desperately want to attend it. I am urvashi from Ind...
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... know this will be held on next month. I would be grateful if you could describe...
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...e detail about this seminar for example, proposed date as well as period . Thus,...
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...bout this seminar for example, proposed date as well as period . Thus, I will m...
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...ample, proposed date as well as period . Thus, I will make reservations accord...
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...proposed date as well as period . Thus, I will make reservations according to t...
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...period . Thus, I will make reservations according to that. Apart from it, sche...
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...ions according to that. Apart from it, schedule of the program as topics of le...
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...rding to that. Apart from it, schedule of the program as topics of lecture, pre...
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...ram as topics of lecture, presentations, PPTs and etc. Presence of time table al...
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...topics of lecture, presentations, PPTs and etc. Presence of time table allows me to pr...
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...f lecture, presentations, PPTs and etc. Presence of time table allows me to prep...
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...me to prepare accordingly. Moreover, you are requested to enrich me with the ...
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...h me with the accommodation plan whether your organization would surround me wit...
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...modation plan whether your organization would surround me with hall of residence...
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...would surround me with hall of residence or I will manage myself. It will be a hu...
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...nage myself. It will be a huge privilege for me to accumulate a great deal of kno...
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...nder the guidance of experts. Therefore, I donot want to miss this optimum opport...
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...ss this optimum opportunity. Eventually, you send me detail information including...
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...you send me detail information including complete cost. Now, I look forward ...
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...ation including complete cost. Now, I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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...mplete cost. Now, I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully ...
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... hearing from you. Yours faithfully Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, moreover, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96756756757 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92598111337 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6124165343 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6428571429 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159896966644 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457989313574 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613024082191 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087929717276 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289503702184 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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