You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
state your reason for writing
describe the problems and explain how you feel
propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Mr Chris,
My name is Ahsan Abid and I am living in Bahria Residence Apartments, room 102. I am writing this letter to complain about a serious issue which is being faced by us since the first day.
I was assured before shifting that the heating system and hot water will be available in my flat but both facilities are not in a working condition. There was no success by workmen in an attempt to fix it as the parts are not in a condition to be fixed. As you know, weather is harshly cold and with no heating system and water, I am freezing to death. I am also not able to study properly, with my exams knocking on the door. I am extremely disappointed by the services provided in this accommodation.
The only solution to this issue is to replace the old machinery with the new one. I demand quick action on this problem or I will be forced to vacate the property without paying my due rent.
I hope to see immediate action from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Ahsan Abid.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40217391304 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48616208047 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8193885524 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6363636364 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119349395715 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040874515198 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452802979199 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538970952856 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583673821237 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.