You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend
who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
explain the reason for the party
give the date and time of the party
suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Cristina
First of all, I hope you are doing fine. Even though the last couple of weeks has been difficult because everything has happened on campus But, we will have to move on and go back no normal as soon as possible. The reason for this letter is primarily because I would like to invite you to the white party I'm hosting next Friday.
I will be throwing this party because of my roommate Kelly. She has been feeling sad and homesick so, I wanna cheer her up. I have been through some difficult times as well and know how difficult is to be alone throughout this crisis. The party will be held at Williamson Street 455, starting at 9 PM make sure you wear white.
The party is gonna be fun, besides the whole school will be there. It's the first time we will reunite again after almost two months. Since the school was suspended. You can bring something to drink but, not bourbon that's on me.
I'll see you soon.
Carlos
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d like to invite you to the white party Im hosting next Friday. I will be throw...
^^
Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...besides the whole school will be there. Its the first time we will reunite again af...
^^^
Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... reunite again after almost two months. Since the school was suspended. You can bring...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ing something to drink but, not bourbon thats on me. Ill see you soon. Carlos
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... drink but, not bourbon thats on me. Ill see you soon. Carlos
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39655172414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11569982694 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2947374198 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.75 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185082893749 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685311535418 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487994934702 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115018281583 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308109645995 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.