You are studying for an exam and you would like some time off work to complete it Write a letter to your immediate manager In your letter Ask for some time off to complete a qualification Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off State h

Essay topics:

You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your immediate manager.

In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
State how this qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mrs. Kaur,

I am writing this letter to request for a break from work due to an exam which is approaching soon.

My exams are in the next week and I could not study enough due to the time constraints. Since I have least amount of time left for the exam, I need leaves for few days so that I could concentrate on my course. Therefore, I would request you to approve my time off request considering my situation.

Once I would be done with my exam, I promise to work extra hours every day to compensate the leverage given during my preparation time. Moreover, I would create the reports which are usually done by others.

When I begun my professional career with this organization, I enrolled in the VBA course because the subjects were helpful to hone the skills required for my designation. Consequently, I would be able to do the coding for our reports and the company's websites that would be beneficial for our venture.

I await for your prompt response.

Yours Sincerely,
Chirag

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...gh due to the time constraints. Since I have least amount of time left for the exam, I nee...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'began'?
Suggestion: began
...h are usually done by others. When I begun my professional career with this organi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, moreover, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68926553672 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71419391472 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4962297248 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26500239797 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919517480987 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564852817513 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134962104706 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546848708453 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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