Dear Mr James,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my study plans and to seek approval from you for work-off for few weeks, though not all at a stretch.
As we discussed last month that I had applied for Post Graduate Program in Data Anlaytics at IIM Bangalore. I am very pleased to let you know that my application is accepted for program starting June 2019. Also, LOR written by you added weightage to my case.
Considering I cannot support full time education I have applied for PGP in DA which is mix of online and classroom based course for a year. Most of classes are online but every quarter there will be one week classroom sessions. Program schedule is released and following are the dates of classroom sessions.
2nd week of June'2019
2nd week of Sep'2019
2nd week of Dec'2019
2nd week of Mar'2019
I will be grateful if you could approve off from work during those days. As these days are declared much in advance, I am sure I can manage work and will ensure that there is no impact to the project I am working on due to my absence during those days.
I am very hopeful that this course will help to gain in-depth knowledge about data analytics which is again a core function of my delivery vertical. After completing this course, I will be better equipped to deliver more for our organization.
I am looking forward to your positive response. Thanks in anticipation.
Best regards,
Laura
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... case. Considering I cannot support full time education I have applied for PGP in DA ...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the classes') or simply say ''Most classes''.
Suggestion: Most of the classes; Most classes
... and classroom based course for a year. Most of classes are online but every quarter there will...
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Line 21, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in anticipation. Best regards, Laura
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67716535433 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49842159857 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5677964797 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8571428571 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249808928968 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070084760975 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714637991643 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109974219696 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918372804305 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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