You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr Maclarins,

I am writing to ask for a week off from my work. As you know that I am still preparing for my PhD in Surveying beside my work in the evening.

The main aim of taking one week off is to prepare and set for my final exams. Thus after considering this issue and after organizing the tasks that I am in charge of, I would like to inform you that I rely on Jack for this responsibility. He will be covering my duties during my absence from April 15 to April 22.

I would appreciate if you could be helpful and understanding. Since I am satisfied with my job for your company, I look forward to accomplishing great improvements in my work for the future of our company.

Moreover, as I believe on Jack’s abilities to accomplish the work effectively, I hope that you don’t mind providing me with unpaid leave till I hand over my exams papers.

Thank you in advance for considering my situation.

Yours Sincerely,

Naji Lichaa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... to prepare and set for my final exams. Thus after considering this issue and after ...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'moreover', 'still', 'thus', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208121827411 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.167512690355 0.167888034529 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0406091370558 0.0606518309736 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304568527919 0.0506257000042 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.152284263959 0.118615021944 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.172588832487 0.107062808482 161% => OK
Participles: 0.0456852791878 0.041066498444 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87498815245 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0304568527919 0.0385302599488 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0406091370558 0.0714148451538 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203045685279 0.0191574576366 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 964.0 1141.60824742 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.134020619 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54022988506 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.247126436782 0.284621296913 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189655172414 0.211203875043 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14367816092 0.133321485273 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120689655172 0.0843313296314 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87498815245 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.4492781632 62.8969750728 95% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4 16.4300151701 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0829056028 44.7399317507 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 90.9928171075 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.4300151701 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.613754768223 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.3655172414 37.5504026743 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.21739130435 1.13073093955 108% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27539878978 0.331212695627 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0657737927677 0.0927372745006 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0507388919017 0.0736520305886 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.690918745337 0.579516596996 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216556367407 0.180689518051 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115177767814 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559403175861 0.0765303033291 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.192858148483 0.211926503985 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104008162781 0.0737400523855 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168064143266 0.203819188451 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495603995601 0.067151250289 74% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.