There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is one of the oldest types of art. It was created by our ancestors for the entertainment purposes. Music has been changing for all years of its own existence. In the stone age folks started to use melodies in order to create traditional hymn to differentiate own nation from another. Nowadays, it’s almost impossible to make a list with names of all music genres, as there is very immense amount of music directions with started from traditional nationalistic melodies to modern music which we can listen everyday on the radio or TV.
The role of music in our life depends on music genre, our mood and private flavors. Somebody loves to listen to the soft music, such as blues, classic, folk music. It helps us to relax, free our mind from excessive amounts of thoughts related to our daily routine. Another category of people fell in love with energetic genres. For example, disco, club or even rock music. These genres provide people with appropriate amount of adrenaline and makes us vigorous in particular situations. For instant, its easier to make exercises in gym listening to your favorite compositions which give you a strength.
There is also very important aspect of the music is lyrics. Some song contents lyrics related to particular hardships of people’ daily life and can prevent us from wrong things we could do. To give a clear example, my favorite Russian band named “Area” ten years ago released an album, which comprised a song “The skies will find you”. The main idea of this song is prevent people, especially youth, from committing suicide. I think expression of important thoughts through the music is very important in today’s life.
Traditional music is counts as not popular within inhabitants; however, it plays its own role. The national hymns are very important attribute of nationalism of every country and we can’t reject it.
In conclusion, music is indispensable part of our daily life. Sometimes it can substitute a good psychologist or teacher. Traditional and modern music plays different roles and each one is important for us.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254237288136 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.138014527845 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113801452785 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0290556900726 0.0501214627716 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0677966101695 0.0437548338989 155% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111380145278 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0217917675545 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85179142505 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314769975787 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0629539951574 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0145278450363 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00726392251816 0.011925033212 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2114.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09221902017 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35734870317 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273775216138 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21325648415 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14409221902 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85179142505 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 67.2917321942 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7727272727 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1060805226 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 43.1502488866 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.64948453608 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448869967825 0.332605444948 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0595714496508 0.102741220458 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0548438450665 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458742748603 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118116096523 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166403602885 0.134430193775 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129280485133 0.0742795772207 174% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299950527507 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0926977188961 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291247439919 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514828953179 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.