There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
music has a long historical connection with human lives. it carries emotions, feelings, and sentiment. There are many kinds of music around the globe. but, I believe that only home country produced traditional music is crucial than adopting to foreign styled music because our own country's talent had to be encouraged than the internationally made music or our young talents would go useless. Moreover, every individual since the time they born and brought up they listen only to regional and traditional music.
To begin with, every day if we start with good chords it is predicted that we would go through the day with fresh energy. when a person undergoes into sad or gloomy state music will do the magic, it would take them into another level where they can feel relaxed, calm. Everyone needs a tune at least once a day to get into a quality mood. For instance, A study on a group of 100 people among different regions has revealed that music can make them feel better when they are lone and it has the potential to offer peace when a patron is anxious or on rage.
Furthermore, the different kinds of music are like rock, continental, heavy-metal. All these music types are of various origins. Although these types are played all over the world only traditional music is followed after all were done. The importance of this lies in its origination and its heritage which needs to be carried further for future generations. For example, Classical music is as popular since its beginning in the 18th century.
In conclusion, listening to international music is acceptable but, it should not be overlooked with traditional music. Both types have different preferences and significance. For a country to keep its characteristic it should encourage more traditional music than embracing foreign tones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, after all, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01655629139 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74552037152 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.8722959072 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1176470588 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462026509047 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145816802508 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931255585722 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287817875195 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990447101935 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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