You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Kevin,
Hope you are well and this letter find you well. I am writing this letter to inform that I have to change dates of my visit to London and to apologize for his unexpected situation.
As I mentioned before , I was working on a Project related to needs of our clients and should have finished until the end of June. However, we could not finish on time as a team , therefore we will be working by the first week of the next month that would be take six or ten business day. I am really sorry for this inconvenient situation and hope that I am caused any problem regarding your Schedule.
On the other hand, I just wonder that as I will be free from 10th of July, is that date suitable for you ? if it is not , please let me know which dates ok you are? I apologize once for all happened and I look forward to seeing you with cute smile on your face.
All the best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apologize for his unexpected situation. As I mentioned before , I was working on...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed situation. As I mentioned before , I was working on a Project related to n...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r, we could not finish on time as a team , therefore we will be working by the fir...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...f July, is that date suitable for you ? if it is not , please let me know which da...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat date suitable for you ? if it is not , please let me know which dates ok you ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not , please let me know which dates ok you are? I apologize once for all happen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17543859649 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2089539495 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0047028525 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209583450479 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792141124064 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634000680854 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147699999588 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795517172851 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.