You forgot a travelling document in a taxi. Write to the cab office to have the documents sent to you.

Essay topics:

You forgot a travelling document in a taxi. Write to the cab office to have the documents sent to you.

Dear Mr. David,

I am writing to inform you about my recent loss. I boarded a taxi at your Maryland terminus, on the 15th of April, 2019 and I mistakenly left my travelling documents onboard. It was actually a brown envelope which contains, an International passport,e-ticket and some other travel-related documents.

Needless to say, these papers are very crucial to me because I am supposed to travel to Belgium for an important conference, on the 20th of April, 2019. This meeting is very imperative to my promotion at work and it is a life-time opportunity which I cannot afford to miss.

To start with, help me check with the taxi driver who was on duty on the said date and confirm if he has by any chance kept the documents for me or turned it in at the "Lost and Found" section.
Give me a call if found, and I will send a check to have the documents mailed to me.

Thank you dear your anticipated assistance and I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Valentina Jones

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
... your Maryland terminus, on the 15th of April, 2019 and I mistakenly left my travelling doc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , e-ticket
...hich contains, an International passport,e-ticket and some other travel-related documents...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...an important conference, on the 20th of April, 2019. This meeting is very imperative to my ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with, help me check with the taxi driver who was on duty on the said date and con...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67039106145 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9184798135 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.639852598 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216064609255 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778306863534 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06117114832 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115472344832 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639632388181 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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