Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the child having large number of toys.
Some parents purchase lots playthings for their wards. This attitude has both its pros and cons and such will be discussed in detail.
There are many advantages to buying many toys for youngsters. Nowadays, a lot of toys are quite educative and creative. Firstly, having a large number of various toy-things makes a child develop an inquisitive and analytical mind. In addition to this, it also helps the children develop an independent skill because they could play alone without soliciting for anybody's attention and would be able to solve some problems on their own. For instance, a recent study conducted on primary school children in Nigeria showed that toddlers that undergo Montessori kind of teaching performs better that their counterparts that were taught with the conventional mode of training.
Despite the merit of possessing more toys enumerates above, too much access to large numbers of toys has a demerit of making a child too much reliant on it and hence may create a communication gap between the ward and family members or their peers and also may affect the wards performances in conventional subjects. Many children becomes addicted to their toys and this has a rippled effect on their social behaviours and academic excellence. A recent study shows that children who has access to a lot of toys are susceptible to being an introvert which may lead to bad habits such as developing criminal minds and harbouring anger and hurts which is one of the reasons many of them are aggressive.
To conclude, spending a lot of money on acquiring huge numbers of toys for children has both its pros and cons, and this has been discussed in the above essay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...educative and creative. Firstly, having a large number of various toy-things makes a child develo...
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...children in Nigeria showed that toddlers that undergo Montessori kind of teaching...
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...ntional mode of training. Despite the merit of possessing more toys enumerates...
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Suggestion: become
...in conventional subjects. Many children becomes addicted to their toys and this has a r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, may, so, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96797153025 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679537314 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5199542264 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353984228553 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123346056628 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648130010006 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19806110488 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687335016543 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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