You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it,
- describe the meal you had, and
-why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to the local restaurant that I have visited recently.
First of all, I would like to introduce myself, my name is Tomasz, me and my wife are resident of Rockdale city for more than 20 years. Our passion is food and restaurant especially middle east cuisine. Two days ago, we visited, new Iran restaurant opened nearby the Town Hall, name of the place is ‘The best Iran cuisine’ and I would like to describe my grateful satisfaction of the food and service that they provide. At the beginning I want to mention about the dishes that we tried, for the entrée we decided to have a traditional Iranian bread with garlic which was delicious. However, that was not the most memorable meal that we have tried this evening on the main course we chose a BBQ cattle meat, and this was the most amazing food that I have tried in my life. Moreover, the interion of the restaurant is stunning, there are beautiful middle east paintings and sculptures. Besides, the waitress and the other staff of the restaurant were extremely hospitable.
I believe, that this place is worth visiting for everybody not people just like me. Because everybody will find something that suite to his taste.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 533, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traditional Iranian bread'.
Suggestion: traditional Iranian bread
...ried, for the entrée we decided to have a traditional Iranian bread with garlic which was delicious. Howeve...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for everybody not people just like me. Because everybody will find something that suit...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uite to his taste. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86877828054 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57489521711 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.663689071 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140742561187 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053223771895 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588472008798 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123196092008 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106359755819 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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