You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-* Describe the work you have b

Essay topics:

You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-

* Describe the work you have been doing

* Explain why you can no longer do this work

* Recommend another person who is interested in this work

Dear Madam or Sir,

I am John Smith, and I have been a volunteer at Redmond Wellness Center for the past six months. While I find the work fulfilling, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to continue it after the end of this month.

I have been working mostly in the rehabilitation department. My duties include helping to set up the equipment for physiotherapy, helping patients with dementia, and organizing events for elderly patients. Additionally, I also help with record-keeping whenever required. I have decided to move to Boston to complete the last year of my graduation, so I am unable to continue with the volunteer work.

My friend, Mary, who is a nursing student, is interested in taking up the role. I am confident that she's capable of handling the duties well. Also, she is studying computers so she might be able to help with the technical aspects as well. I am attaching her resume for your reference.

I hope to hear back from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

John Smith

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...aking up the role. I am confident that shes capable of handling the duties well. Al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82954545455 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89125837656 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6374333462 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234231728494 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807139740921 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752239853354 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132355992974 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684860694464 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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