Dear Sir,
I have been dreaming about getting an admission to Master of Data Sciences in your college for many days and I feel grateful by knowing that my interview has been scheduled on December 10 at 9 AM. Unfortunately, I have other prefixed appointment. We are launching a new website on the same day and it would be extremely difficult for me to miss my work on that day. We have been working day and night for this day to come and my presence should be imperative to the process because I am the core architect for the entire design.
Therefore, I request you to postpone our interview day, preferably for the next day or I could even manage for the post-lunch session at around 2 PM. The reason is, both career and personal pursuits are imperative for me. I hope you would consider my request.
I would also like to know a few other details about the interview so that I could be equipped myself better. Could you please let me know how long the interview process would be and do I have to undergo any assessments.
Thanks in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Sudheerkumar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66116430595 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7131315695 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208748885017 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776371633532 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511636203539 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106276732265 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475352017789 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.