You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologize and

Essay topics:

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.

Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Mr. Steven,

I am writing this letter to inform about my absence for the AI (artificial intelligence) course enrollment interview, which is scheduled on Thursday 9.00 am, due to sudden turn of events.

First of all, I am very thankful for selecting my application for the course, which is one of the compulsory subjects to complete the semester. I want to utilize this opportunity well. Unfortunately, it is impossible for me to report on the venue at the scheduled time because of my appointment with a dermatologist is on the same day and at the same time. Moreover, not only it is very significant for me but also I have waited for months to get it.

I am really sorry for the disruption. I hope you understand my situation. If it is possible, could you please reschedule it on any other time on the same day or on any other day?

In addition, I wanted to ask about the duration of the process and if there is any written test involved as a part of the procedure. I would really appreciate if you can provide the information at the earliest so that I can come prepared.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Sandip Ramani

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60765550239 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87881659561 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598086124402 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8936629941 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193865956835 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626143872787 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388251789409 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927278502058 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237617249747 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.