You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
-Introduce yourself
-Explain the situation
-Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Rohan and I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the canon camera that I bought from your showroom located in oasis mall on 24th of October.
It was working perfectly fine in the showroom when I bought it. But after returning home I found there is a scratch on the lens also the flash is not working, if in case it works sometime then the lens shutter doesn’t close then. As soon as I got to know about this issue, I therefore, returned to shop same day to the same sales representative and explained him the problem with the camera. However, I have done all formalities and handed on the camera to repair team.
But, it's been one week past and I haven't received any news about the camera that how long it will take more. I bought this camera for a holiday trip and in a week I am traveling. Hope you will understand my grievance. I cannot wait for it know and I would like you to give us full refund.
Looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Your Sincerely,
Jackie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...m. But, its been one week past and I havent received any news about the camera that...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ive us full refund. Looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Your ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39690721649 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49589417334 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9498437242 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302996573567 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948803785641 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311360357843 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151534621212 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419143148228 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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