You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter,
* introduce yourself
* explain the situation
* say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Divya, I am one of the regular consumer of your electronic shop and services.I am writing to let you know that I am not happy with the smart phone and equipment which I bought on last week. The smart phone itself is good but the attached charger with the product equipment is not working properly. I hope you understand my problem and do favorably.
Let me explain the problem with equipment in more detail. I am die hard fan of electronics As mentioned, I got Samson smart phone from your shop. While the phone is under super working condition but unfortunately the charger that came with this equipment is not working at hectic needed time. I’ve been using your products about five years and I am very happy with your service too. But this phone charger making me almost irritate-able to do my task and work. As, I cannot concentrate on my other works because I am working as sales adviser to a MNC company and most of official meetings are all gone through phone conversations.
Would you kindly exchange me the other charger set by the end of the day? I am also fine with exchange of smart phone equipment so that I can get a new piece of full set equipment.
If you could really change old equipment with new equipment it is really appreciated. If you exchange as soon as possible it would mean a lot to me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Divya.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...er of your electronic shop and services.I am writing to let you know that I am no...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'died'.
Suggestion: died
...lem with equipment in more detail. I am die hard fan of electronics As mentioned, I...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...et a new piece of full set equipment. If you could really change old equipment w...
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Line 15, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...new equipment it is really appreciated. If you exchange as soon as possible it wou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58914728682 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56832597218 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8765826945 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138210470803 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540523444419 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270414522167 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892343100914 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133502811969 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.