You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter:tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job and how you

Essay topics:

You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter:
tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving
explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving
ask for a letter of reference

Dear Mr. Walter,
I am writing to apprise you about my decision to resign from current job and responsibilities. While am also glad to inform you that I have been awarded 100% scholarship in IIT-D to pursue MSc in Data Science.

The two years of association with this organization has been a learning experience under your mentorship. I also feel privileged to get an opportunity to work with the team that was always supportive and an epitome of team spirit. It would be tough to bid adieu to a team that was more like an extended family, but I am already looking forward to joining this organization after completing my studies.

I would also like to request you to kindly provide me the letter of reference detailing all the work and responsibilities that I carried here for two years. Your help would be appreciated. Moreover, my classes at IIT-D would commence from 2nd Aug; hence, I would request you to kindly reduce my notice period to 50 days.

Thanking you for your support and appreciations.

Yours Faithfully,
Bhawna Sharma

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... from current job and responsibilities. While am also glad to inform you that I have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94897993069 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8765399747 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276826173787 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122370748416 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850633984703 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175391444897 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846484265171 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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