You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation.
Explain why you cannot continue at this time.
Say what action you would like to take.
Dear Sir,
I am one of your student of Human Resource evening course. I am writing you because I am no longer in a position to attend the classes this quarter.
As you know, I am already working in a private bank as a full time employee and I took this course to enrich my professional skills. Last month I attended the classes with ease. In contrast, this month it seems I will miss out on it. Because recently our bank has launched two new products which needs special training.
So, the bank has scheduled evening training program to enhance employee skills. As the training hours are after normal job hours. Thus, it disturbs my class timings. Therefore, I am unable to attend classes.
I request you, to please freeze my course this term, as I have already paid the total fee in advance. I would like to resume it as soon as i get some surplus time.
I will be extremely overjoyed and appreciate your this act of kindness. Thank you in advance.
Sincerely yours,
Irfan Ullah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... already working in a private bank as a full time employee and I took this course to enri...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s month it seems I will miss out on it. Because recently our bank has launched two new ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e. I would like to resume it as soon as i get some surplus time. I will be ext...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as soon as i get some surplus time. I will be extremely overjoyed and appreci...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus, in contrast, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61797752809 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46590178887 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9141257289 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.8 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8666666667 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21045431191 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600787859597 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651306063917 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116436107843 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479630211819 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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