Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Describe the skills a person need to be a good parent.
One way to educate our younger ones is to facilitate them with information to become admirable parents later on. Some people agree with this opinion of educating kids at school to be good parent. However, i strongly disagree with this thought for some sane reasons, and some skills which can be handy to parents are discussed further in essay.
Some people believe, that there are some core reasons to approve this a valid idea. Firstly, mostly, teachers being parents themselves are in better position to exercise this activity in best possible way. Secondly, it enables students to be good parents in future. For instance, it makes them realize the role of parents and their responsibilities in more suitable fashion.
Alternatively, others think that such practice can be resulted in waste of time or energy. To begin with, the probability of a student to take it as a burden is very high. As an example, this can affect their studies, and lead to stress out. As, students these days have already much on their plate to cope with, so this may eventually lead to poor academic results. Furthermore, students in their early age have immature mind. In particular, it is more likely that what has been taught will be forgotten soon and such age they would rather giver importance to other things of their interest than this.
While there are some skills of essence, that a parent must possess. First of all, parents should have good communication skills. Such as, it will assist them to handle their offspring in best possible way. Moreover, good education is a prime need too. To illustrate, with good education back round parents will realize their responsibilities in more appropriate manner.
To conclude, it is good idea to assist people to be stand out parents, but this must be done once they are finished with their academic studies to ensure its effectiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...tter position to exercise this activity in best possible way. Secondly, it enables stud...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... it enables students to be good parents in future. For instance, it makes them realize th...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...l assist them to handle their offspring in best possible way. Moreover, good education ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in particular, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95886075949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64692253881 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.902807136 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4736842105 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402133896778 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129164646424 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112686564219 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244137714179 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912066261262 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.