YOU HAVE A FULL TIME JOB AND ARE ALSO DOING A PART TIME EVENING COURSE. YOU NOW FIND THAT YOU CAN NOT CONTINUE THE COURSE.
WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR TUTOR. IN YOUR LETTER,DESCRIBE THE SITUATION,EXPLAIN WHY YOU CANNOT CONTINUE AT THIS SAY WHAT ACTION YOU WOULD LIKE TO TAKE.YOU SHOULD WRITE ATLEAST 150 WORDS.
RESPECTED SIR
I AM ONE OF THE STUDENTS COMING FOR YOUR EVENING COURSE FOR LAST TEN DAYS.I WANT TO CONVEY YOU THAT I WONT BE ABLE TO CONTINUE THE COURSE ANY FURTHER DUE TO MY JOB COMMITMENTS.
I AM WORKING AS AN AREA MANAGER IN AN AUTOMOBILE COMPANY AND HAD TO DEAL WITH PROBLEMS OF ALL THE CENTRES IN THE CITY. TO ATTEND THE EVENING CLASS AT YOUR INSTITUTE I WAS EXCUSING MY SUPERIOR BUT IT HAS EFFECTED MY PERFORMANCE AND I HAD BEEN GIVEN A WARNING BY THE HIGHER AUTHORITIES.
AS THE FESTIVE SEASON IS AROUND SO THIS IS PEAK PERIOD IN AUTOMOBILE INDUSTRY.HENCE I CANNOT CONTINUE THE COURSE ANY LONGER. I WAS REALLY INTERESTED IN YOUR CLASSES AND I WOULD LIKE TO CONTINUE ONCE THIS HIGH SALE SEASON IS OVER.IT WAS A GREAT OPPORTUNITY TO LEARN FROM YOU AND I WOULD DEFINITELY LIKE TO GAIN KNOWLEDGE FROM YOU IN FUTURE IF I COULD.
THANKING YOU
YOURS FAITHFULLY
SUKHMAN SIDHU 10TH AUGUST 2018
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...R YOUR EVENING COURSE FOR LAST TEN DAYS.I WANT TO CONVEY YOU THAT I WONT BE ABLE ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Y FURTHER DUE TO MY JOB COMMITMENTS. I AM WORKING AS AN AREA MANAGER IN AN AUT...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...G YOU YOURS FAITHFULLY SUKHMAN SIDHU 10TH AUGUST 2018
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5487804878 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66390150111 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5532954613 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245462903637 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108015723462 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071188493426 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998266906034 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836809785704 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.