Countries around the world will be facing significant challanges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in next ten years?How can these problems be overcome?

Essay topics:

Countries around the world will be facing significant challanges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, it is becoming more difficult to live in any country around the world because all countries are facing serious issues in terms of over population, problems relating to education, and issues related to environment. Lets try to understand what are these problems and what could be the possible solutions?

In India, the most important problem is of over population. The population of India is increasing at a faster rate and in turn it leads to other problems such as very high population density, unemployment, and health related issues.

The solution to the problem of increasing population in India is to create nationwide awareness about family planning and this can only be possible with help of Government of India.

The second important problem India is facing is environment. More usage of household appliances, more number of vehicles on road, and deforestation to create more homes are major factors that are taking a toll on environment. The solution is to this problem is to take drastic steps to control the pollution and to produce and use eco-friendly products at reasonable rates.

Education is third imporatant problem India is facing today as education is becoming more and more costly and lack of good institutes as compared to population growth. The solution is to provide quality education at affordable price, creating more and better institutes.

In conclusion, every country is facing problems related to education, environment, and population, hence drastic measures needs to be taken by every country to control this.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3185483871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94503663217 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520161290323 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4733341861 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300540626331 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119747968176 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752448721626 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163308502366 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794831195323 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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