Countries around the world will be facing significant challanges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Degrating environment,increasing population and inadequate standards of education are the hurdles the has to face in near future. My country is no exception and will have to face the consequences of these problems in coming years.
The world has witnessed the deterioration of the surrounding natural resources since the industrial revolution which started sin 19th century.India is a developing country,hence, it is establishing industries to support and strengthen its economy.With increasing factories, pollution has become a major challenge for people. Also, with higher income level today, automobiles have congested the roads, further adding to the pollution through their smoke from burning fuel. To substantiate,Delhi every year is choked due to the alarming concentration of particulate matter in air. Moreover,India is to witness the migration of people from rural to urban areas for better opportunities which will only aggravate the present situations of congestion and pollution in the cities.
Admittedly, the problems mentioned above seems inescapable,however, with proper planning and execution of the following suggestions could make a difference. Firstly, government need to acknowlegde that urban migration is inevitable, so, it must
strenghten the public transport, which is facing problem of efficiency today. This could help in decreasing both congestion and pollution in coming years. Secondly, jobs could be taken to villages, owning to the fact that still 60% of indians live rural areas.
In conclusion, the challenges of congestion and pollution can be overcomed with proper planning and developing our villages in coming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, as for, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84426229508 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52627676002 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.006198047 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183290731292 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669158880987 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722373740623 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106207503913 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855778484587 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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