You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
...........
You should write at least 150 words.
DEAR MR JOHN
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU ABOUT THE CONDITION OF FURNITURE IN YOUR APARTMENT WHICH I HAVE RENTED RECENTLY AND WOULD REQUEST YOU TO TAKE IMMEDIATE ACTION.
I HAVE MOVED TO THE HOUSE ON SECOND FLOOR OF YOUR BUILDING LAST WEEK WITH MY FAMILY.THOUGH THERE IS ALL FURNITURE WE NEED BUT IT HAS BEEN EATEN BY TERMITES. SINCE THE OUTER APPAERANCE OF FURNITURE DON’T TELL THE WHOLE STORY WE CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THE TERMITE ONLY WHEN WE STARTED TO MOVE THE FURTINUTURE AROUND TO SETTLE IN AND HOLES STARTED TO APPEAR ON IT.
MY FAMILY REALLY LIKED THIS ACCOMMODATION AND WE ARE LOOKING FORWARD TO LIVE HERE. SO, I REQUEST YOU TO EITHER REPAIR THE FURNITURE OR REPLACE IT.PLAESE TAKE THE ACTION AS SOON AS POSSIBLE AS TERMITE MIGHT ALSO DAMAGE THE OTHER WOODEN THINGS.
THANKING YOU
YOURS FAITHFULLY
SUKHMAN 30ST AUGUST, 2018
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...QUEST YOU TO TAKE IMMEDIATE ACTION. I HAVE MOVED TO THE HOUSE ON SECOND FLOOR ...
^^
Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...TERMITE ONLY WHEN WE STARTED TO MOVE THE FURTINUTURE AROUND TO SETTLE IN AND HOLE...
^^
Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'TO living'.
Suggestion: TO living
...CCOMMODATION AND WE ARE LOOKING FORWARD TO LIVE HERE. SO, I REQUEST YOU TO EITHER REPAI...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... THANKING YOU YOURS FAITHFULLY SUKHMAN 30ST AUGUST, 2018
^^^
Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'AUGUST 2018'.
Suggestion: AUGUST 2018
...ITHFULLY SUKHMAN 30ST AUGUST, 2018
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93288590604 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49543522719 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697986577181 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.303439031 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208628624727 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102625792327 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839288882793 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115759482718 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967011058617 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 7.59969072165 135% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.