You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letterDescribe the situationExplain why you cannot continue your course at this timeSa

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to dis-continue my part-time MBA course. Although, The course would give advantage to me in the future but I am not able to manage the time so that I have decided that I will withdraw my name from the course enrollment list.

Let me explain the situation (circumstances ), which forced me to take this step. For the past two years I have been working in a software engineer, and now my company offered me to moved to their US office. Therefore, I would be impossible for me to attend the part-time course classes so I want to drop the course.

Therefore, I request you to cut my name from the registration record and also I would like to take my security deposit back.
So could you please send me the details what is the processor to take caution money back and I have attached my enrollment card for your reference. Kindly let me know if any information is needed from my side.

Your Sincerely,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t me explain the situation circumstances , which forced me to take this step. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54237288136 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61894181016 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1096792431 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205592098377 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082208295263 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518350925863 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115443632694 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043091022087 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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