You have a full ­ time job are also doing a part ­ time evening course.You now find that you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter●Describe the situation●Explain why you cannot continue at this time●Say wh

Essay topics:

You have a full ­ time job are also doing a part ­ time evening course.You now find that you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter●Describe the situation●Explain why you cannot continue at this time●Say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am current student of part-time training program of ‘Automation Testing’ in your institute. I am writing to inform you that owing to my official trip to Sydney from my current organization, I will not be able to continue this training course from next week onwards.

As you know currently I am working as a manual tester in an IT company and I decided to pursue training course to upgrade my skills. It has been going really well and I really want to appreciate the practical approach used to teach students in your institute. However, because of some urgent client requirements, I have to visit customer site and it is expected that my stay will last for 2 months. This is the reason that I will not be able to attend classes at least for 2 months.

Looking at the circumstances, I would like to request you to allow me to resume this course after two months. I would like to join the new batch in the next quarter, if you permit for the same.

Looking forward to hearing positive response from you.

Best Regards

Jagdeep Kaur.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ntly I am working as a manual tester in an IT company and I decided to pursue trainin...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... am working as a manual tester in an IT company and I decided to pursue training course...
^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'at least', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198113207547 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.183962264151 0.167888034529 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0801886792453 0.0606518309736 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377358490566 0.0506257000042 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.11320754717 0.118615021944 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11320754717 0.107062808482 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0566037735849 0.041066498444 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74444288682 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0707547169811 0.0385302599488 184% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0566037735849 0.0714148451538 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0235849056604 0.0191574576366 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1074.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.134020619 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65263157895 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336842105263 0.284621296913 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252631578947 0.211203875043 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131578947368 0.133321485273 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0578947368421 0.0843313296314 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74444288682 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622163163488 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.4785117551 62.8969750728 90% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3331129471 44.7399317507 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 90.9928171075 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.613754768223 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 44.2631578947 37.5504026743 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.0985915493 1.13073093955 97% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292652345805 0.331212695627 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139271008076 0.0927372745006 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0858872827935 0.0736520305886 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.655060925755 0.579516596996 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170187130244 0.180689518051 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117548505433 0.122183219658 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700136925164 0.0765303033291 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268112799115 0.211926503985 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0586231872642 0.0737400523855 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18682173088 0.203819188451 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633860821814 0.067151250289 94% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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