You have just read an artice in an international travel magazine which contained
some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
-Correct the information in the article
-explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
-suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to an wrong information provided about the Ambaji temple, located at Ahmedabad and how it can be corrected.
I am regular reader of your magazine because most of the details are correct, although in the article of dated 25th August, it is mentioned that the Ambaji temple is a tourist destination with
good accommodation facilities and best suitable for elderly; however the reality is totally reverse. The weather is extremely cold which does not suits to old age visitors and
people having respiratory disorders. Besides, although hotels are not available, tourist can live in cottages which are safe, neat and clean.
It is absolutely crucial to give correct information because many readers plan their holidays based on details provided by you as yours magazine is one of the most trustworthy
publications. If you provide any incorrect or incomplete information, it would impact your brand equity.
It would like to suggest you to correct the information provided in the earlier article and rewrite whole script once again. This would not only beneficial for
the regular readers but also good for you to maintain transparency.
Hope you would understand importance of the correcting details and provide correct one in next article.
Yours faithfully,
Smith Gandhi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aji temple is a tourist destination with good accommodation facilities and best s...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Good
...temple is a tourist destination with good accommodation facilities and best suita...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h does not suits to old age visitors and people having respiratory disorders. Bes...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...es not suits to old age visitors and people having respiratory disorders. Besides, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Publications
...gazine is one of the most trustworthy publications. If you provide any incorrect or incomp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gain. This would not only beneficial for the regular readers but also good for yo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
.... This would not only beneficial for the regular readers but also good for you t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41121495327 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79903421573 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0579899791 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259149278276 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943186907722 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502427061662 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948945059055 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543100792793 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.