Dear Sir,
I am one of the regular subscribers of your travel magazine and I enjoy the explicit content that your press publishes but unfortunately there was some miss information in the latest edition for which I am writing to raise my concern.
The 20th May edition provided a detailed explanation for the country of Kuwait and emphasized the tourist spots around popular locations. While the attractions were elucidated in great detail, the segment explaining the variety of snacks and drinks offered was incorrect.
Kuwait is a Muslim country and it is illegal to carry out trade in bacon and alcohol all throughout the region. Mentioning this as the highlight in your magazine can be found to be in violation of the code of ethics for the country and may result in sanctions towards your publications.
My recommendation would be to omit those sections of the article and republish them with an apology for all the subscribers and in particular to the province of Kuwait. In the future, deploying a few ground researches to collect information on the tourist locations will be a better call to action.
Requesting that my suggestions be considered.
Faithfully yours,
Adlen DSouza
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12182741117 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95136524842 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5088069575 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173129226661 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519140858688 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06269146194 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805192957525 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698510583535 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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