You have lost your credit card.
Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
explain how you lost the card
ask the manager to cancel the old card and issue you a replacement.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Regarding my credit card from RBC Bank, I am writing to inform you that I lost it and request a new one.
I am Sepideh Asgari with bank account number 215368. About two months ago, I migrated to Canada and opened a student bank account in your highly renowned bank with my SIN number which is 58654. After two weeks, I received a credit card in my mailbox.
Yesterday, a bunch of intimate friends of mine and I went to an Iranian restaurant called Shater Abbas on Young Street. Since they were my guest, I paid for the food with my credit card. Having arrived at my home, I realized that my card is not in my pocket. I called the restaurant manager and told him the story, but he did not have any information about it.
Since some might use my credit card, I immediately blocked it through my online banking. Hence, I, kindly, appeal to you to cancel and replace it with a new one.
Highly appreciated it if you could send me the newly issued card to my mail address. If you need more information, please let me know.
Thank you in advance. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Sepideh Asgari
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, Regarding my credit card from RBC Bank, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53365384615 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37925401485 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0909893602 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307659636506 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103751503441 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595676850983 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169581878886 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579656811452 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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