You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
describe the public event
explain why you think he/she would like the event
tell him/her about the other activities you can do.
Dear Sari,
Long time no see! I hope everything is okay with you. Regarding the Magic Fire Festival which is going to take place on January 15th, I’m writing to invite you to come to my hometown.
First, I am so curious to visit you in my place and talk about your life experience after immigrating to Canada since I am toying with the idea of continuing my education at the University of Toronto. Although I have a memory like a sieve, I can vividly remember from my childhood that you were super interested in fireworks. As a result, since Iranians have specific fire shows during that festival, I’m asking you to come to my city and accompany me during this popular event.
Not to forget to mention that during this enticing occasion, there are fantastic recreational activities such as magic and dog shows. Additionally, some restaurants, specializing in traditional Iranian foods, are free on that day. I hope you accept my invitation to have as much merriment as possible.
Looking forward to receiving your positive reply.
Best wishes,
Sepideh
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75915423613 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1727466529 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189578879397 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643579379616 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415814820669 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10654050206 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03742658801 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75915423613 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1727466529 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189578879397 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643579379616 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415814820669 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10654050206 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03742658801 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.