You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor, in your letter:Describe the problem.Say how long it has been a problem.Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

Essay topics:

You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor, in your letter:
Describe the problem.
Say how long it has been a problem.
Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am Md. Azharuddin and I live in an apartment block number: 4 which is located right beside your villa. I am writing this letter to express my problems caused due to your dog which keeps barking whole day when you are way for work.

I am currently pursuing my PhD in computer science which requires me to work whole night, as a result I very often sleep during days, but due to extreme noise created by your pet during day time, I am unable to have quality sleep, due to which I am facing negative consequences on my studies. I initially thought of neglecting this, but it has been three months now with persisting problem.

In this regards, I sincerely request you to feel my sufferings and move the pet to either your villa’s backyard or on the terrace before you leave for work in the morning. Moreover, We can discuss this personally to come-up with alternative solution.

Thanks in advance to helping me in sorting this out. Await your response on this and feel free to visit my home anytime.

Yours sincerely,
Mohammed Azharuddin.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng negative consequences on my studies. I initially thought of neglecting this, b...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nths now with persisting problem. In this regards, I sincerely request you to fee...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70899470899 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58401561495 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8827900574 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172542921204 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751643095899 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614049279167 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790127952866 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597151313688 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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