You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from he envelope. Write a letter to the bank`s head office. In your letter;
1) Explain why you are writing.
2) Express concern about the missing card.
3) Ask them what they intend to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing regarding the acknowledgement of my new bank card. Although i appreciate the services your bank offer but i am much concerned about my bank card which was missing from the envelope.
Let me express my concerns in more detail. I am worried that if the card has been misplaced then anybody can use it to make transactions as it`s encryption has not been set yet. The fact that the envelope`s seal was already broken when i received it makes me worry more as the card must have been deliberately removed from it after it was mailed at my address from the bank.
I am unable to comprehend this situation as i have never gone through such problems before. May i ask what actions does the bank take in such scenarios to ensure that the card is not used by any unauthorized person? I hope you will consider my situation favorably and do what needs to be done at your earliest.
I look forward to receiving my new bank card without any such negligence.
Yours faithfully,
Sumair Aslam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ledgement of my new bank card. Although i appreciate the services your bank offer...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eciate the services your bank offer but i am much concerned about my bank card wh...
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Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ope's seal was already broken when i received it makes me worry more as the ...
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Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... when i received it makes me worry more as the card must have been deliberately re...
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Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... gone through such problems before. May i ask what actions does the bank take in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74175824176 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7861856679 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1517762126 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337454699169 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125945453194 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841701923335 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202661229592 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823877089273 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.