You have recently attended a professional course Write a letter to your manager to thank him her for the opportunity and say What was it about Explain why it was helpful to you Suggest other co workers participate in this course

Essay topics:

You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity and say
– What was it about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers participate in this course.

Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to express my deep appreciation and gratitude for giving me the opportunity, to attend the course on CAD (Computer-Aided Design) design software at Global Training Software Institute.
It was a specialized course, with up-to-date tools and strategies to help in CAD designing. The content was well-structured and the instructors were well qualified, informed, and knowledgeable.
As an engineer, this course broadened my horizons and polished my technical skills. I became a design expert and able to manage all aspects of the work more efficiently and effectively. This course will guide and direct me in the execution of all my upcoming projects.
I would suggest all the members working along with me to take this training. This will improve their knowledge and skills and will help them boost their credibility and prestige within their network.

Thank you once again for this referral.

Yours Faithfully,

Jai

Votes
Average: 7.3 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Design
...attend the course on CAD Computer-Aided Design design software at Global Training Software In...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is referral. Yours Faithfully, Jai
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31210191083 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02890185046 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4118581952 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8181818182 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223034711345 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766310183828 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447154058574 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117681564426 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484042895648 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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