You have recently bought an airline ticket from a travel agency and unfortunately you are not able to fly on these dates Write a letter to the travel agency manager to cancel the ticket Explain in your letter what are the flight details why do you want to

Essay topics:

You have recently bought an airline ticket from a travel agency and unfortunately you are not able to fly on these dates. Write a letter to the travel agency manager to cancel the ticket. Explain in your letter
- what are the flight details?
-why do you want to cancel it?
- what would you like him/her to do about it?

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter with regards to your support in canceling my tickets to Bangalore which I booked from your agency due to some medical emergencies.

A week ago, I had booked the flight ticket from Ahmedabad to Bangalore. The date of traveling to Bangalore is 11th May 2019. My booking number is KM12345 on the flight JA 703. The traveling duration is 6:45 am to 8:15 am.

Yesterday, my father suffered from a heart attack. Right now, he is in the ICU and under critical condition as two of the veins are 100% blocked in his heart. The doctor has advice for the open heart surgery and is scheduled on 11th May 2019. This is the reason I want to cancel the ticket, as my family needs me by their side.

It would be grateful if you could allow me to postpone the ticket and adjust it to any other favorable date in future or I can get the refund back including the cancellation charges.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Hima Kacha

Votes
Average: 7.9 (6 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50276243094 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42643983406 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3582680802 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230296704445 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703859970915 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568171115618 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125045437604 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533672062805 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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