Someone has returned your bag with all its belonging which I recently lost. Write a letter to thank that person
Thank him/her
Explain how you left your bag
Explain why it’s belonging were important to you
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to thanking you for providing my bag which I had left in the train on 5th May 2019.
I am very grateful that you have made an effort to return my bag. Though I cannot express my gratitude with words. I am extremely delight to get back my belonging which I badly needed.
I was traveling from CTM to university station in train on 5th May 2019 in train number 045. I was visiting my college as I had to submit my final thesis copy to the college. I was already running late and was in so hurry that I had left my bag under the seat number 25.
I have my final exam on 20th May 2019 and the exam halt ticket was in my bag. The university do not allow to seat in the exam without the halt ticket and they do not issue a new ticket with short span of time. So, I required the ticket before my exam.
Thank you for your time and efforts.
Yours faithfully,
Hima Kacha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...u have made an effort to return my bag. Though I cannot express my gratitude with word...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in on 5th May 2019 in train number 045. I was visiting my college as I had to sub...
^
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it my final thesis copy to the college. I was already running late and was in so ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ft my bag under the seat number 25. I have my final exam on 20th May 2019 and...
^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: seating
... in my bag. The university do not allow to seat in the exam without the halt ticket and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12087912088 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11731751281 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554945054945 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9186708251 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159999444172 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706736942803 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740103170695 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123065399916 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885020893297 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.