Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
The trend of moving to developed countries along with families for employment has profusely risen today. The children of these families benefited with better education and lifestyle which they being deprived off in developing countries.
Undoubtedly, shifting to new content alone with children result in adaptability issues. This means that kids have to move to new culture in new schools and colleges. Children who are shy feels inferior along with local schoolmates and are also being bullied. For example, a recent research has shown that 85 percentage of Asian kids faces racism in foreign countries.
Nevertheless, the benefits associated with it can not be overlooked. The families which move to developed nations for better work opportunities are able to give improved lifestyle to their offspring. As, that are able to earn more this aids them to live a luxurious lifestyle. Moreover, children can give financial aid to family members living in developing countries.
Furthermore, in foreign countries the education system is upgraded and this gives a good platform to the kids for their future development. The academic system is equipped with latest technology and gadgets which in turns improves skills and knowledge, as better education makes children a better person in life.
To recapitulate, although shifting to foreign nations with children might be fatal as they have to face racism but the benefits of good opportunities for education and lifestyle outweigh the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45493562232 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88196705856 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549356223176 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9607396066 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17246314894 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674118838751 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035233473665 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104477479971 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222774006184 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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