Do you say that a person should get married for love or money. Discuss both view and give your opinion
There is an ongoing debate that whether a person should get married for love or should be with the one who has handsome amount of bank balance. According to one school of thought, love marriage is a boon as, the better half is always by your side, while some others deny as money is required for the livelihood. This essay agrees with the fact that to be with somebody who gives you all the care and be your support for life is necessary for successful wedding.
Firstly we would look in to pros and crons of being married for love. love means caring and being a support system for all the tough times. Furthermore, it builds better understanding between the two peoples. Though money is an important factor for living a good life but it cannot be outweighed with love. while a man and women can earn at any time.For example, a recent research showed that love marriage 80 percent more successful than compared to the arranged one.
Marrige is essential for all, be it for money or love. Now taking about the pupils who think that wealth can buy all the happiness of the world through lavish house, luxurious cars and exotic holidays. For them all the above mentioned things are essential for a happy relationship , however love is the only thing that can’t be bought.
To recapitulate, although wealth is a prerequisite for a healthy relationship, perhaps it cannot be overlook as compared with the partner who can make you life full of joy with his care and support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69348659004 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50500635027 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7392215597 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241368257708 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102817728488 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694884899804 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148596169935 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809665697763 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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