Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
As most of the millennials are spending 8 to 10 hours at their workplace, there is an ongoing debate on whether job security is superior to job satiety. This essay will discuss both the perspectives and will argue why job satisfaction is cardinal instead of a permanent job.
People who are in favour of job security may argue that having a permanent job brings financial stability. Apparently, if a person has a job which is a full-time permanent position, they would have a steady source of income which would not fluctuate as seasons come along with certain benefits. These kinds of jobs, for instance, generally come with employee benefits such as health, dental and vision care; so, that takes away the burden of medical expenses which would otherwise cost a significant amount of money. Due to these advantages, some people might establish a conception that non-fixed term jobs are better than following one’s passion.
Whereas other and I believe that job satisfaction is indispensable while choosing a vocation. The reason behind such strong thought is explicit unless one feels a sense of purpose in their job, there is a diminutive chance of advancement in their professional career. For example, numerous doctors have a high sense of purpose as they save lives owing to such thinking even though they have a hectic work schedule, they tend to enjoy their designation despite being on contract or fixed-term employment. Therefore, unless an employee is satisfied with their employment, the probability of better personal and professional life is hard to imagine.
To conclude, although fixed-term employment brings employee benefit programs along with fixed income, being satisfied with one’s job is essential to living a prosperous life instead of a monotonous life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24738675958 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85520457752 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.031485771 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329428591704 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139696657872 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10050021237 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191749856568 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928438322739 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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