You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
Why did you move there?
Describe the new apartment
Invite him/her to visits you
Dear Timothy,
I am sorry that I have not written for so long time. My work keeps me so occupied that I never have a minute for myself. I am writing to invite you to frequent me as I have relocated to new flat.
The place where I used to live previously was very far away from my office that I had to spent two hours of my day in traveling to and for. Therefore, I decided to search for some accommodation near my office premises and utilize that amount of time on other productive work rather than on traveling.
The new apartment is just 5 minute away from my work place. The flat has three bedrooms, one kitchen and one hall room. Moreover, there are two balconies- one is common in the hall room and the other one is attached with my bedroom. Additionally, the place is equipped with all the basic amenities such as refrigerator, washing machine , microwave and air conditioners.
I want to invite you to frequent me on the coming weekend for a night over so that we get to spend quality time with each other.
I can not wait to hear from you as soon as possible.
See you soon
Hima
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es such as refrigerator, washing machine , microwave and air conditioners. I wa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35922330097 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51927619559 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9492914786 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10835116105 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536071899405 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737736966565 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631527211446 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451904845329 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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