you work at home and you have problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. in your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to lodge a complain about the laptop which I had bought from your shop 6 months back.
Since a year I am working in an infrastructure technology based company where most of the time I have to work from distance. This resulted in buying a portable desk with which I can easily communicate with my organisation and work as per my pace.
After a sound research I concluded, that apple mackbook Air is all what i need. Since a month I am facing the issue of battery problem. The charging get reduced within a short span of time approximately an hour. Also, the temperature of the laptop increase profusely. As a result, I am not able to work as I require a charging plug everywhere i travel and unable to meet my project submission deadline.
I highly appreciate if you could help me resolve the issue as the device is in warrantee period. Furthermore, it is a request to either replace the device or solve the problem on urgent basis, as I have to leave country next month for work tour.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hima Kacha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to lodge a comp...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r, I am writing this letter to lodge a complain about the laptop which I had bought fro...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bought from your shop 6 months back. Since a year I am working in an infrastructur...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed, that apple mackbook Air is all what i need. Since a month I am facing the iss...
^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... apple mackbook Air is all what i need. Since a month I am facing the issue of batter...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as I require a charging plug everywhere i travel and unable to meet my project su...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72514219812 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0119681445 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233900205115 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689836389847 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492950166835 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110026502864 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383059634 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.