Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter
- describe the job you found for him/her
- explain why this job is good for him/her
-say why he/she needs to do to get the job
Dear Amelia,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to tell you about the part-time work which I found that you were looking for.
Recently, I visited the star bucks coffee shop at maninagar area and there I came know about the vacancy at the service counter. As, you had told me that you want to work after college so that you can cope with the study cost. This job is to serve people visiting the café and the salary is 3500/- rupees per month along with the tips from customers.
As you are always fond of coffee and great at making coffees both cold and hot. This work will aid to improve your skills and work passionately. And the best part of the job is that you have to work for only 2 hours a day in evening from 7pm to 9pm.
All you have to do is to write a letter to the store manager about your willingness and along with it attach your résumé.
I cannot wait to hear from you about your joining at star bucks.
See you soon,
Hima
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bucks'' or 'buck's'?
Suggestion: bucks'; buck's
...ng for. Recently, I visited the star bucks coffee shop at maninagar area and there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23684210526 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94814351573 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3963062888 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1818181818 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22499841413 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872396736857 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760467268515 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129815796763 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796771247107 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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