you had just missed a friend's party, write a letter to apologise.
in your letter, you should :
- apologise to your friend
-explain why you could not attend the party
- tell her what steps you will take to avoid missing it in future.
Dear siddhi,
I am writing this letter to apologise for missing the celebration on last weekend at your place in ahmedabad.
I am extremely sorry, as I could not attend the party and I know saying sorry will not change the situation but I really feel guilty. I am sorry from the bottom of my heart and badly need your forgiveness.
The main reason was my negligence of not leaving from baroda on time, as on weekends the traffic congestion is high due to increased amount of people commuting to and fro from ahmedabad and vadodara. Also, on that day it took 4 hours for me to reach the destination which usually takes 2 hours.
However, I learnt it in a hard way that I have to always travel by taking enough buffer period to reach ahmedabad from vadodara so that such scenario is not repeated in future.
I would be happy if you can forgive me and can not wait to hear from you soon.
See you soon,
Hima Kacha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear siddhi, I am writing this letter to apologise fo...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the situation but I really feel guilty. I am sorry from the bottom of my heart an...
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Line 17, column 22, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hard way" with adverb for "hard"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...akes 2 hours. However, I learnt it in a hard way that I have to always travel by taking ...
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Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...a so that such scenario is not repeated in future. I would be happy if you can forg...
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Line 25, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. See you soon, Hima Kacha
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41750453347 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3098255484 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192741288683 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788048212526 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602474689692 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909098465909 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642885437048 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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