Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages associated with it?

Essay topics:

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages associated with it?

More and more international companies are moving toward under developed countries for their benefits. It has resulted into escalation of employment, as the companies could get workers at low wages. However, these companies have been reported to exploit their employees by not following standard labor laws.

Multinational companies have started their office and corporate houses in poorer nations; which has resulted into exploitation of the employees. As, they do not follow international labor rules, so the workers are forced to work for more than 8 hours per day and are also not provided with overtime benefits. This has severe impact on person’s mental as well financial health. Talking about financial aspect, people are not able to cope up with daily requirement with low-income as the daily utility cost has increased compared with past. Moving toward mental factor, overtime and task achieving pressure makes people anti social and some might commit suicide as they are unable balance the personal and professional lives.

There are some benefits which cannot be overlooked. Multinational organizations upsurge the unemployment rate which is the main problem faced by developing countries. Consequently, young people can have better job opportunities and are not diverted towards crime if they do not have any job in their hands. Hence, it is benefited to poor nations both economically and socially.

Moreover, transnational companies can get better productivity by recruiting worker with less salary. For instance, apple company is able to sale their products at $499, as people of China assemble the parts of their product at Lowe salary, for which an American would charge double to accomplish the work.

To recapitulate, displacement of international companies in under developed nations aid in growth on economic scale as well as for their effective product with less capital investments. However, the government should look over the unfair treatment done on their citizens.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...low wages. However, these companies have been reported to exploit their employees...
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...efited to poor nations both economically and socially. Moreover, transnational...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as for, for instance, talking about, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51298701299 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93574724858 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4057991708 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152207147963 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492806222823 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495660649981 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837347037812 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172503493924 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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