Your friend is coming to your country from abroad but you canny go to pick him her up at the airport Write a letter to him her and say Why you cannot pick him up Suggest alternative ideas Talk about what he can do in your country

Essay topics:

Your friend is coming to your country from abroad , but you canny go to pick him/her up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say
Why you cannot pick him up?
Suggest alternative ideas
Talk about what he can do in your country

Dear Vishu,

It’s being so long since we last were in touch. I have not forgotten all the wonderful time we had spent together. I am writing to apologize as I cannot come to pick you up at the airport due to so unavoidable condition.

Unfortunately, I am having an important meeting at the office planned on the last moment by my manager. And as I am the team leader my presence in the meeting is mandatory. My meeting will last for about 2-3 hours, so I can not catch up at the airport for pick up.

Nevertheless, there are many ways by which you can reach my home from the airport. If you are carrying too much of luggage you can hire a taxi from the airport and if you are traveling lighter than you can travel through local bus which is also economical.

Furthermore, I have planned the trip to north of india. The Taj Mahal in Agra and rishikesh in uttrakhand are in the top most list of our destination. Moreover, there is a wedding coming up in the family and that will give you the taste of our rich culture.

I am early waiting for you.

See you soon,
Hima

Votes
Average: 7.7 (9 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...airport. If you are carrying too much of luggage you can hire a taxi from the air...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34803921569 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54091377092 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8547519939 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220457056094 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734790304912 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788842086303 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108564881249 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409880074686 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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