Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
<p style="white-space: normal; margin-bottom: 1.5em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-color: transparent; font-size: 1.09em; line-height: 1.5em; caret-color: rgb(85, 85, 85); color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif;">Many people believe that actors, athletes and musicians are overpaid nowadays. I personally agree with the statement since there are other occupations which are more important and vital for human beings. The following essay will discuss in details about the disagreement and a brief explanation about jobs that should be highly paid. </p><p style="white-space: normal; margin-bottom: 1.5em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-color: transparent; font-size: 1.09em; line-height: 1.5em; caret-color: rgb(85, 85, 85); color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif;">It is a fact that a lot of entertainers such as movie stars, pop singers or professional sports players are highly paid. It can be seen from their night lifestyles, luxurious properties and sports cars. A lot of people believe that they are overpaid since the function of their jobs is only to entertain the public and it is not categorised as vital jobs. There are other jobs which are more important for societies, and they should be well paid. Firstly, many people do not realise that the existence of firefighters is crucial for the neighbourhood as they could save many people's lives. Besides that, their jobs are also considered as a high-risk job, since they could be seriously hurt or injured. </p><p style="white-space: normal; margin-bottom: 1.5em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-color: transparent; font-size: 1.09em; line-height: 1.5em; caret-color: rgb(85, 85, 85); color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif;">Secondly, as a leader of a nation, the president or prime minister has a lot of responsibilities. He/she must be meticulous, prudence and wise in taking decisions, since his/her decisions might have a serious impact on the public. And then, becoming a country's leader also faces the terror of being murdered or kidnapped by terrorists. Therefore, these professions should be well compensated in accordance with the risk and responsibilities. </p><p style="white-space: normal; margin-bottom: 1.5em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-color: transparent; font-size: 1.09em; line-height: 1.5em; caret-color: rgb(85, 85, 85); color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif;">In conclusion, it is believed that famous entertainers are overly paid these days. I strongly agree with the opinion, since entertainments are not the basic need of human beings. I do believe that there are other jobs which should be highly paid since they are high risk and their existences are essential for mankind</p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26097560976 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.37221841548 2.80592935109 156% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443902439024 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.388533531 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.461538462 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5384615385 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157726578335 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905061897941 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078037944703 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157726578335 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.62 12.4159519038 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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