Some people feel that entertainers (e.g film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
In today’s world artists from film fraternity or musicians, athletes are minting an ample amount of money. However, I completely disagree with the statement and will provide evidence in the below paragraphs to justify my point of view.
To embark on, defence forces be it BSF, Army, Air force or Navy should be the highest paid job. It would not be wrong to say that they put their lives in danger for the sake of their country and their fellow citizens. It is entirely because of their sacrifices, we are able to celebrate special moments with our loved ones, we are able to celebrate life. I can reminisce of a few great martyrs of our land who were killed recently in a grenade attack in Baramulla. They sacrificed their lives for the sake of their country.
Additionally, there are so many other jobs such as scientists, teachers, farming which must be paid in contrast to the celebrities. These are the people who play a major role in our society like teachers delve a child into a future responsible citizen of tomorrow. Owing to the reason that they are not getting a handsome salary, teachers are not performing their duties diligently which is perilous for our future generation. For instance, researchers from medical field work so hard to invent cures for diseases like cancer, AIDS and so on but they are not being paid according to their dedication towards their work and humanity. The government must incubate a social and economic model which gives more recognition to such professions by raising their monetary incentives.
To recapitulate, I would like to conclude the statement by saying that allowing one special class to earn plenty of money and depriving other classes of similar privileges far outweigh any positive effects. It is simply in future nobody will aim to become a doctor or an engineer, in fact, everyone will follow the dream of becoming an actor.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87267080745 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66804168509 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5187708123 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124560147316 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042491803614 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531344426711 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651004770506 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288339834725 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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