Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time. what is your opinion? give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience.
Travelling has become one of the known leisure activity for people and for most of the people-travelling international is known to be a status symbol. What’s more exciting than roaming in a foreign land and exploring the local culture and local cuisines rather than sitting in a hotel room. moreover, one can make new friends and can be introduced to the diverse cultures which can be a good experience.
Firstly, moving or travelling to a new country is a good experience. it opens a wide range of opportunities and gives a chance of exploring different cuisines, cultures, religions, beauty, art etc. there are people who like and love travel blogging and are paid a good sum of money which are not possible just by sitting in a hotel room. For instance, countries like Australia, Indonesia are doing great only because their economy is dependent on foreign travellers. Tour and travel is an important part of their economy.
Secondly, travelling to a foreign country can open a new horizon for a person. In the current era, where everyone is busy with their work and taking a timeout to relax and rejuvenate himself or herself is extremely important. visiting places and making new friends broadens the vision and perspectives. It catalyzes the habit of mutual respect and can help understand people in a new light.
To conclude, I would say that to get the real essence of travelling, it is important to meet native people visit the local attractions rather than passing time at a hotel room. moreover, travelling can bring people closer to each other despite of their differences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94776119403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88492444266 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.768530234 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139480942631 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472337062922 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330278532305 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885474262418 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236044002034 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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