In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Taxes are the major source of revenue for the government. Therefore, some people feel that paying taxes and that too on time is their foremost responsibility that citizens have towards their country. However, few people do not agree with this view and think there are other ways also to contribute to society. I totally agree with them.
Paying taxes is important because the government needs money to fund various social and infrastructural projects. The government provides several health care facilities, transportation system, an educational system with less cost or no cost to most of those people who cannot afford to even think of these things. For instance, india has developed on a fast pace as the current government has proved themselves by registering india in one of the most powerful nuclear countries. The government has provided a fantastic infrastructure to the country where twenty-four hours journey can be covered in a mere four hours by building a six-way highway. But it is wrong to assume that a person paying tax is a good citizen. Many criminals pay taxes and their financial contribution to the country is nothing when we compare them with the amount of damage they cause.
Tax is just one of the contributions that a citizen can make. it is equally important to abide by the law, help the needy citizen and respect the social norms. When people respect the law, social factors, respect the people, it creates a harmonious environment where everyone feels safe and happy. Another responsibility of every native is to help the government to maintain clean surroundings and uses natural resources carefully and mindfully. There are times where these simple contributions to the society can make a difference and are more valuable than paying taxes.
To put it in nutshell, paying taxes are important and is only the one side of the coin that is incomplete without the other part which is maintaining the peace and abiding by the law. It is a moral obligation to pay in whichever manner the individual prefers.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...tural projects. The government provides several health care facilities, transportation system,...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... contributions that a citizen can make. it is equally important to abide by the la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00884955752 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84971325542 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2790435444 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152312328237 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440137927571 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049944739319 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914155998824 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683148202881 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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