Hi Karamesh,
It has been a long time since we met last time, hope you and your family all are well and in the best conditions. I would like to tell you that I have changed my job recently due to different kind of reasons. As you remember from our last meeting that I need to travel two hours per day to reach and come back from/to my old work, but now the needed period to reach the new company is only five minutes. Moreover, the new company is surrounded by a garden and it has also a swimming pool and gym, so I can enjoy there during my break time.
In this job you need to be more patient and professional with the customers and your colleagues comparing with the old one. Since, you are most probably dealing with their bank accounts and they will keep calling you and emphasize for everything especially for the company accounts. It is look like an administrative and calling center job and you are required to be active and available in your office most of the work time. In the other side, this work is offering to us a lot of training and travels.
In the meantime, I am preparing for my wedding party and I hope that you can attend it. I will send you the details about this occasion once I reserve everything. Hope will we meet soon my lovely friend.
Yours faithfully
Noman Joka
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36475409836 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38118281061 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7722020958 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247044486636 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872026590623 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418244860122 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142766882035 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501026500453 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.